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Good Enough"You should go talk to Layne," Felicity says, "He sounds like he really misses you. He made a huge mistake." Felicity is a friend of both myself and Layne. I actually met her through him. As a matter of fact, he tells her everything, and that's how I found out what happened.
But of course I object to trying to talk. What else am I supposed to do? Go running to him, show up at his dorm, interrupt whatever the hell he and Delicia are doing? I think not.
But somehow she convinced me to send him a text. How, I don't know. Something psychological I myself don't understand, which means she probably had no idea herself. But I did.
"Felicity seem

Part of My PastWeakness in your eyes,
You can't go a whole month without impaling your disguise,
Oh,
Had to get your friend to tell me,
That you can't live without me now,
But I can,

So are you trying to save us?
Because I can't see,
Through the window fogged with lies,
False hope preceding,
Don't think you're winning now,
You're just a part of my past,

You say you want me back,
Then the next day you say, "Let's be just friends,"
Oh,
I really wish you could tell me,
What you see in her, and not me but,
I don't really care,

So are you trying to save us?
Because I can't see,
Through the window fogged with lies,
False hope preceding,
Don'

PoisonousTrembling,
But not from the cold,
Tearing up,
But not for why one would assume,

You make my life so complicated,
You cause all its drama,
And I hate you for that,
But when you asked me if I do,
All I could do was ask you,
Have you given me enough reason?
Yes,
You have,
But do I listen?
No…
I don't…

Broken and empty you left me,
Shattered and alone I stand,
You didn't seem to care then,
So why now?

Fall back on me when you're hurting,
Leave me on the floor when you're doing well,
Things didn't work out with her,
So what?

Why should I drop what I had and take you back?
All of your drama and your shit?
I can ho

Guarded HeartAnd now you know,
But somehow I can't regret,
Because it's better this way,

I'm terribly unsure,
And I'm not sure to what extent,
Your knowledge of my emotions may be,
But you know,

I welcome in a new day,
With the tear-filled eyes of the broken,
But I can't bring myself,
To feel any remorse,

The moon is alive,
In the starlit sky,
Reminding me how far I am from you,
And it hurts,

The twinkling stars,
Are oh so large,
But to us they appear so small,
Like my guarded heart,

Forgive me in my insanity,
Accept me in my uncertainty,
Please, just break me,
So I won't have to do it myself…

StupidI'm tired of feeling stupid,
Because I know I'm not,
And I can prove it,
If you just give me a chance,

I'm not ignorant,
And I'm not naïve,
No, I'm just as intelligent as you,
If not more so,
Not conceited,
But I can see through the lies,

I'm not as dumb as I feel,
I can't be,
Because I'm not,
But there's just something inside me,
It pushes me down,
And it holds me there,
Keeps me from knowing,
From feeling,
From believing…

Make it go,
Leave me alone…

FatalAlone and defeated I stand,
Even though you're by my side,
But I feel nothing,
Broken and abandoned I've been,
And even though I've healed,
That will never change,
Confused and mystified is common,
Who am I but another person?
Something I don't desire,

Strong and callused,
I've learned to become,
Guarded and secretive,
Is my stone cold heart,
It has no room for your love,

My mind is an abyss of jumbled thoughts,
Confusion and intelligence intertwined,
It will not be silenced,

If you want me to stay,
Then give me time,
Rushing what could be glorious,
Could turn to be fatal…

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Critique by ~veridisquotwo May 23, 2012, 7:50:38 PM

Wow. Love it. She's cool and all. Although it needs a little bit of MORE QUALITY, if you know what I mean. The piano which is reflected through the sunglasses seems to be the subject right? Well, I'd say too much emphasis. Maybe next time you could blur it out a little.

Anyway, that doesn't matter. It's a GREAT, FANTASTIC pict. I love the way she smiles. Haha. Also, try using photoshop, to bring out more of the details, like the hair and all...

Awesome. Just plane awesome.

If I was to rate this, I'd say, about 4.5 out of 5.

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Critique by ~IceEnchantments Apr 19, 2012, 9:29:47 PM

this is an awesome picture. it shows strength, focus, and power. she shows an emotion of knowing what to do, and what shes gonna play. the necklace, hair, and glasses imply she likes a more rock/jazz type of music, so that's what she wants to play. the smirk shows confidence and self assurance, even cockiness xD even if she doesn't know how to play, shes gonna try her best. the overall tone of the pic is pale and white, and there is a light spot on the piano, so i cant help but think that she is front and center stage. this picture really makes me think of an up-beat rock/jazz piano chord

great job ^^